We are living in a high speed developing society, and life is continuously moving towards complexity. Thus, having a designed life plan in complex modern life become more important. I definitely agree with the statement that having the ability to plan and organize for people themselves is vary vital. The following paragraphs will aptly elucidate my standpoint with three conspicuous reasons.
To begin with, it is less stress to achieve a success by the ability which can making a plan in detail. Usually, people take a period of time to achieve a big goal or finish a project. There are many ups and downs in the procedure because of the obstacles which always are not in our images. However, a good plan takes the case into account, and leave time for person to solve the problem in the comfortable mood. Because human knows they have enough time to finish the work, they don't need to get hurry. Moreover, working in a good mood may have them a high efficient work.
Next, having an ability to plan and organize help people achieve their goal on time. Without any shadow of doubts, complexity of study and work, in today’s world, requires young people use their resources efficiently, such time, money, energy. A plan assists people to make their dreams to be realized, and goal to be accomplished. That is to say, a few minutes spent for planning and organizing a good timing schedule before study or work could help people reduce wasting time on the aimless actions, thereby improving productivity and efficiency. Hence, ability to plan and organize is a powerful weapon people must have.
As a consequence of aforementioned reasons and examples, it is crystal clear that high speed rolling wheels of modern life urge us to learn how to plan and organize. Last but not the least, it is highly advised that to manage the priority of study, work and life due to the effect at now and in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...n and organize for people themselves is vary vital. The following paragraphs will ap...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... plan in detail. Usually, people take a period of time to achieve a big goal or finish a proje...
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Line 4, column 482, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve enough time to finish the work, they dont need to get hurry. Moreover, working in...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...k and life due to the effect at now and in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80303030303 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58673063736 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2610772797 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2352941176 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272363671743 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876052808798 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686581946947 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163958192802 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670988800136 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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