Travelling is more important than reading books in order to understand the people and the world do you Agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
People learn variety of experiences like cultures, rituals and places through different sources. Chiefly, reading useful books and traveling to new areas provide us with a huge amount of information. Basically, a group of people think that books help us to know these information. However, some people believe that self-observation during a journey give us a better understanding of what we wanted to learn. I strongly believe that traveling can help someone much more than anything else. Since, traveling has so many benefits in comparison with just reading a limited number of texts.
First, books only gave you a general view about the subject and you have to accept the writer’s understandings toward subject of the book.as a result, it provides you with a one side judgment which cannot assist you to deduct a good concept of the book’s main subject. For example, when you begin to read a book to learn something about a specific matter like Indian people culture and rituals you can just extract some general ideas about them which may not satisfy you in a number of issues.in addition, books do not cover every aspect of an experience and you can only learn about the parts of the subject that included in the book.
Second, generally, books were gathered or written by a small limited number of people who reflect their own ideas and understandings about the book’s subject.as we know history had many misconceptions and diversions. So, if someone tends to learn some reliable information, I totally believe that he must observe that matter himself and asks a lot of related folks which hold true reliable information. Therefore, traveling is the best way for executing of this act.
Also, in some occasions books and texts provides us with controversial and vague info about something that we wanted to learn. It may write so many things around the subject but won’t give us a straight conclusion. Furthermore, it may written by a radical writer who wanted to cover his own ideas. This can leads to a huge misguidance for the readers who haven’t seen the fact closely.
In conclusion, books and traveling are two major paths which we could use for finding and extracting new information in our life. Each of these has its own benefits and deficiencies. However, I think that traveling may provide us with more accurate information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...people think that books help us to know these information. However, some people believe that self...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'write' or 'be written'?
Suggestion: write; be written
...traight conclusion. Furthermore, it may written by a radical writer who wanted to cover...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...wanted to cover his own ideas. This can leads to a huge misguidance for the readers w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03553299492 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85076792919 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52538071066 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1051777738 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224498134768 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690624068866 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056480751103 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124185160532 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678603588421 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.