tv or telephone
In modern days, people rely on many technologies, like telephone, television and so on, in order to do their routines. Even though the TV programs influence a lot of aspects of human beings' life as follows, getting news, general information, amusement and so forth; but, I, personally, think the telephone is more important in people's life in comparison to television. It causes getting communication easily and using the services of emergencies. It also prepares a convenient way to order products and requirements like booking restaurants, hotel and other such things.
In the first place, accessing to telephone, people will be able to get communication, with everyone wanted, without any restriction of time and distance. They can do their businesses, friendships, common tasks and more of the same comfortably by telephone. It is not to mention that in every individual's life, some emergencies will be happen in which they need others' help. In these conditions if there isn’t any access to telephone, they would be frustrated and even sometimes maybe encounter with perils and dangers. In the opposite, lacking of TV will not cause noticeable harms, especially they can compensate the lack of television by services of internet, they will be able read news, be up-to-date, and also watch amusement programs. For instance, once I got car broke down on a remote road, I didn’t access to anyone, and I called rapidly Roadside assistance. I don’t know what I had done, if I hadn’t phone.
Secondly, people can use of telephone services for many demands like ordering food, reserving books, booking hotels and so, by which human beings will live more convenient and help them to save time. They can manage their time and be punctual more and more with telephone services. For instance, as an employee who is going to go vacation some days later, is working in their enterprise, simultaneously, he or she can use telephone services and book a hotel and restaurant for the exact time they want; order the travel equipment; rent car; and so on.
In summary, in my opinion, the services and influences of telephone is not comparable with those of television. In many cases, telephone has not any substitute, in the opposite, lack of TV-programs can compensate by internet. Telephone give opportunity to people in order to communicate, handle emergencies, and do their routines and so on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ams influence a lot of aspects of human beings life as follows, getting news, general ...
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...one. It is not to mention that in every individuals life, some emergencies will be happen i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, even so, for instance, in summary, in many cases, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12977099237 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03008459199 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547073791349 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.464196597 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.588235294 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182936362741 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062717200085 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837908590814 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148148569935 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113414623015 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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