in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
From emerge of civilization until now, transportation is one of the most human concerns. Mankind uses different means of transportation during the time from animals to car and airplane. By developing technology and creating a lot of transportation tools, it is expected that shortly the number of car usage decreased, however, in my opinion, the number of cars will be increased in the next twenty years. Following sentences will elaborate on my opinion.
First of all, at this time car is one of the most frequent transportation machines which people use for daily life. People use a car to travel, go to their work, etc. As the population grows, the number of people wants to move from one place to the other places increases, in other words, the traffic demand will increase which required more car and vehicles. Based on the statistical report from our official transportation minister office, the number of vehicles grows increasingly in the last twenty year. Therefore it could be anticipated that for the next twenty-year this trend will happen. And we will witness more car at the street just bypassing the time their option and design would be complicated.
Second, it is true that bypassing the time the technology will be developed but, the twenty-year is not much enough that human can contrive and invent a new type of machine which can replace and substitute the car. Exploiting cars now is well accepted among ordinary people. Introducing a novel type of moving-machine even if it will be invented at that time, required some preconditions, for instance, cars need roads to drive, generally, the infrastructures should be prepared. I think it is not possible or hardly possible to be done in this short time
Finally, today there are other types of transportation, for example, train, sub train, aircraft, etc., These types of vehicles first, are more expensive than cars, second, could not be used everywhere since, the number of stations, airport are limited. But using the car is more convenient as all routes and roads are prepared in any places you want. It is more user-friendly and may people prefer to travel by their one means of transportation rather than using public transportation. Public transportation is always crowded and busy which may create an unfavorable atmosphere for people using them.
Definitely in the far future new machine and tools will be invented, which can move people under a second, hollow void tunnel for instance but, for twenty years, unfortunately, the usage of cars will be increased which can pollute the air and environment. Maybe governments should develop public transportation tools thus, with this economic crisis it would be a little difficult to achieve.
To sum up, the number of car increase in the twenty years as the population grows, and the other types of transportation are much expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96372104826 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1012482555 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37486139884 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117104107552 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594637112165 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201430387442 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385661108796 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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