In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Technology in all fields of humanity is being developed in a rapid rate. I believe in a quarter of the century people will reduce car using because of progress in elaborating on public transport and consciousness and awareness in consumption.
To begin with, plenty of contemporary/modern and developed cities anticipated this issue and invested money and resources on convenient and comfortable transportation. Thus, cities like Moscow or Singapore have faster, cheeper and, essentially important, highly comfortable method of transportation - it is mrt. Overwhelming percentage of citizens there prefers using metro to driving privet cars. Cars in modern cities lost its actuality.
The second idea in favor of the first is that nowadays movements like zero waste or other green campaigns entail society to review the way how inefficiently people use cars. For instance, tree liters of fuel are needed by me to get to work and back. Although there are approximately seven billion of dwellers on our planet, even if less then a quarter of persons uses fuel like me it still be too much! Firstly, we will run out of oil soon. Secondly, we are truly will aware about fuel consumption one day and reduce it. I believe in our youth pretty wholeheartedly.
To sum all up, I clime with confidence that cars will lag in comfort from public transport and people became aware about harmful influence on the earth by cars and reduce the consumption of them in twenty years or even less.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...of dwellers on our planet, even if less then a quarter of persons uses fuel like me ...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...r of persons uses fuel like me it still be too much! Firstly, we will run out of o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06530612245 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03033171529 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648979591837 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6663756976 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202373445296 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605591092912 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581788907054 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123511812017 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541946425963 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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