“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, automobiles are an important part of modern society. In my opinion, I believe that number of automobiles will not decrease and be continue to increase. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, as salaries increase, cars are affordable for a large number of people. The economy of the whole world grow up steadily and people will be paid high in the future. There are more undeveloped nations than developed nations, so there are many people, who are now not able to purchase a car, will become potential consumers when their incomes are enough to buy a car. For instance, my country, South Korea, was undeveloped in the 1960s after the 6.25 war, which devastated all over the country, and South Korea was one of the poorest nations in the world. Thus, only a few people had an automobile. However, after rapidly developing in the 1970s, people's income increased sharply, and purchasing a car for individuals was booming.
Furthermore, people in modern society spend a lot of time enjoying their life. Working hours get shorter and shorter and it makes people have more leisure time than they had in past. So, a car is essential because people prefer going out of a city to spend time in their free time. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. If I had no car, it would be hard to do activities such as skiing, playing tennis, and hiking because I have to go far away from my home and It is inconvenient to go by public transportation. This example demonstrates why the number of cars still grow up in the future.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the automotive industry will continue to grow. This is because an economy grows and people spend time enjoying their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74025974026 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68504726827 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9167292036 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8823529412 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130702501873 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409809370913 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382982711209 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751633560232 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268399681779 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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