My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young.
It is of great importance that a lifestyle has become easier and more comfortable. For this purpose, people employ a variety of devices to live conveniently. Over the course of their life, they oftentimes guess what it would be like to be several decades ago. It appears that most people agree that it is far easier to live nowadays than in the past days. I also have the same opinion with respect to this issue for two reasons, which I will explorer in the following essay.
First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that advances in technology help people make their lives easier. The main reason behind this rationale is that people's living environments continue to improve. In other words, there have been remarkable advances in infrastructures such as public transport, houses, sanitation, etc., which have raised people's living standards. To illustrate more thoroughly, People can get to where they want to go faster than in the past. Due to developing transportations, people living in Korea can go anywhere in the country in one day. had they lived in the past it would have taken a few days to get from Seoul to Busan. My wife's experience is a compelling example of this. she had worked for 2 years in Wonju which is about 100km far away from Seoul where we live and she commuted a distance of 100 km every day. It would not have been possible without modern technology. Based on all these considerations and experience, I am certain that The present is better to live than the past.
Furthermore, people now work fewer hours than before. This increases both their leisure time and overall happiness. Today, almost all workers enjoy time off on the weekend and usually work no more than 40 hours a week. To be specific, people in modern society can easily pursue whatever hobbies and interests make them excited. A concrete example of this would be that my father worked more than I do. When he was young, he often worked more than 60 hours a week and even worked on Saturdays. In contrast, I work just five days a week. My light workload means that I have time for the hobbies that my father was only able to do after his retirement. Briefly, It is evident that my lifestyle is much better than my father's because of what I mentioned above.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in the present day engenders a myriad of advantages. This is because of technology development and working less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in other words, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73364485981 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63730717152 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53738317757 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0250860688 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9230769231 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200762029125 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562326404293 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678368767846 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103318186702 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807085903813 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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