In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than they are today
The statement claims that, there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years than there are today. In the blank eye, it may seem ridiculous to claim such thing as everyday there are thousands of new cars hitting the road. However, in deeper analysis, I found that statement appropriate and that is why I support it to the fullest. Below I will discuss the reasons of my stance.
The way in which our world is going in the path of development, it is really difficult to predict the future and what will happen after 20 years is some type of throwing a blind guess. However, there is a trend and based on which forecasting is done all the time. Today, the rate at which the auto makers are producing cars are obviously higher than previous time. But the problem is that, if we look at the percentage increase in auto selling, we will see that, it is not actually increasing. The world car industry has sold enough cars already and now the market is being saturated. So, clearly in future, it will start to decrease.
However, the decrease in selling cars do not means that, there will be fewer cars in use in future. But, the world's transportation advancement is actually responsible for that situation. In recent days, we can see that, all the major cities are working hard to introduce mass rapid transport system. At one time it was feasible to have a car for a person. But today, the roads are getting more jam packed day by day and government's are thinking the way out of that intolerable traffic and congestion. In all major cities, the city is suffering from traffic and car's are the main culprit of that situation. In a study, it has been shown that, in Bangladesh, 85% of the road spaces are taken by private cars whereas they are transporting only 5% of total population. On the other hand, public transports are taking only 11% space and transporting more than 90% people. So, that is why governments are seriously moved by that issue and investing in public transport like bus, metro, BRT and some others. So, decrease in the amount of cars is visible due to government's increasing taxation and other restriction on cars.
Lastly, the world is growing in a rapid pace and advancement. There are newer and better technology coming everyday. Air travel is becoming cheaper, concept like hyper loop and teleportation is seeing light day by day. Concepts like having a car is getting old and also become sometimes burdensome for owners because of increasing government restriction and traffic congestion. At the same time, in 20 years, world may see a new medium of transportation, which may redefine the concept of cars.
So, to conclude, it is evident that, the advancement of technology, growing environmental concern because of fossil fuel used by cars, increasing traffic and government's relentless effort to introduce comfortable and cheap transportation is going to reduce the number of cars hitting the roads today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... seem ridiculous to claim such thing as everyday there are thousands of new cars hitting...
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Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... market is being saturated. So, clearly in future, it will start to decrease. However, ...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...er, the decrease in selling cars do not means that, there will be fewer cars in use i...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s that, there will be fewer cars in use in future. But, the worlds transportation advance...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...e fewer cars in use in future. But, the worlds transportation advancement is actually ...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... are newer and better technology coming everyday. Air travel is becoming cheaper, concep...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'become'.
Suggestion: sometimes become
...ke having a car is getting old and also become sometimes burdensome for owners because of increa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'whereas', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245644599303 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.170731707317 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.081881533101 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0435540069686 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0296167247387 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123693379791 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0662020905923 0.0351676179071 188% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.73069212212 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0174216027875 0.0309702414327 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0853658536585 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174216027875 0.0209618222197 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121951219512 0.0139019557991 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2928.0 2387.08602151 123% => OK
No of words: 507.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77514792899 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30966469428 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232741617357 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157790927022 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116370808679 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73069212212 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 59.5088196634 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8937284705 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 42.7741617357 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.78571428571 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294174667476 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0976571310268 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693312854683 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486829068393 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167045496512 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122338511165 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157271350939 0.0781384742642 201% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.433171062066 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0798527578029 0.067059652881 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204534403359 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131041060027 0.0618886996521 212% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.