Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged based on the
quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of your essay, and
the quality and accuracy of the language you use to express your ideas.
You have 30 minutes to plan and complete your essay.
Some students prefer to enroll in easier classes so they can earn a higher grade. Other students opt for
challenging courses, even though they might receive a poorer grade. Which type of class do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your essay. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use
memorized examples.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of having easier courses and challenging courses. If I were asked to choose, I would definitely easier courses for a number of reasons I will develop in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, as we all know the most important thing, we get into universities for is what comes after, so if we can’t find ourselves a job it’s the end for most of us. So, having higher grades is the most important aspect seen by companies and universities, most companies won’t even have a look at your enrolled courses they will just see your grades. I have to admit that my opinion has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. You know, when I first entered the university I thought that having hard courses in my certification even with lower grades will be cool, and will have me easily accepted by companies, but I was wrong, after I have finished my third year in university, I thought of searching for a new job to complement my university’s fees, but having lower grades made it almost impossible for me to be in heired with any company, so I decided in my last year to change these courses so I have higher grades and it worked. As a result, I learned that not every thing I learn is needed in my real life. For this reason, I will make an advice to all of you, do not go for challenges till you know for sure you will really work hard for it.
Secondly, having easier courses will give you some free time to spend with your friends and family, and as everyone knows having a good social life is important for having a healthy life. Drawing from my own experience, in these three years when I took these hard courses I was most of the time just studying, so I almost never left my home I were firmed into my room just studying all the time, but in my last year I changed my way, I could’ve go out more, I could just change my mood a little because studying all the time is so stressful and in my personal experience I found myself depressed most of the time. It’s certainly clear to see why easier courses is even better for our social life too.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that having easier courses is much better for career in the future and having a healthy social life in general.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sities for is what comes after so if we cant find ourselves a job its the end for mo...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...fter so if we cant find ourselves a job its the end for most of us So having higher...
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Line 2, column 1036, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...y real life For this reason I will make an advice to all of you do not go for challenges ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, in general, you know, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27868852459 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3748019511 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454332552693 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 427.0 20.1344086022 2121% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1827.0 100.406767564 1820% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 427.0 20.6045352989 2072% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 107.0 5.45110844103 1963% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804083664404 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804083664404 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424182975263 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343529894177 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 212.2 11.7677419355 1803% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -345.01 58.1214874552 -594% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 167.5 10.1575268817 1649% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.02 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.85 8.01818996416 335% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 10.002688172 540% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 172.8 10.0537634409 1719% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.