At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
It is critically important that, universities and colleges have different facilities and all kinds of activities. personally, I believe it is quite useful for the students their university covers all kind of stuff and pay attention equally to all activities. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when there is a different kind of activities such as social interaction and sport activity and it leads to decrease mental pressure and increases both physical and mental health of the person. When you can participate in a social activity if you have a problem with something in university or your personal life you can tell to the other people and gets help from them, as a result, it helps your mental health, therefore, you can focus more on the study so, your grades increase or if you take part in the sports events it can help your physical health so you do not need to overcome physical problems during your study. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, 5 years ago in university I had anxiety problem so I decide to go the meeting with people have a similar problem so we helped together and it helps me a lot after that I never face this problem again as a consequence my grades pump up.
Secondly, in modern ages the key to success in academics or different projects is to work as a team. Yet modern science progresses so rapidly, one person only on their own can not be successful in academics projects. Great things in university projects are never done by one person, they are done by a team of people, so it is crucially important the students learn from sports event or even social activities that work as a team towards their goal, playing sports teach about teamwork, and reaching goals. Teamwork not only help students to become more successful, teamwork has significant effect on improving scientific atmosphere in university, therefore university benefits from collaboration. For instance when my brother in colleges joined the basketball team of their college, he learned from that experience talent wins games, but teamwork win championships so when he wanted to start his career he collected people with team spirit, and it helps him to became a successful person in his life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that social and physical programs as important as scientific activities and equipment, so it is important they do same consideration and financial aid. This because it helps, students mental and physical health and this teaches them how to work in a team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, even so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82378854626 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77375313548 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491189427313 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.753629028 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.428571429 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139229383422 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530487277904 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596694170448 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884733435143 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018899592112 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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