In universities, people tend to concern more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects with a fast job growth including math, science, technology, and engineering even if they are interested in other subjects. Do you agree or disagree?
Under the current education system, college subjects have become increasingly diversified. How to choose subjects in college has gain much attention of the public. Most students are advised by their parents or teachers to choose subjects which can guarantee a brighter career prospect, while students themselves would probably select the field that caters to their interest. As far as I am concerned, it seems that the latter is more reasonable. The reasons are as follows.
First off, choosing subjects that students are interested in can help them to master the curriculum contents better. Interest is the best teacher. Driven by great enthusiasm and passion for the subject they are interested in, students are more likely to devote much of their time and energy to what they are learning, thus having a better grasp of knowledge and skills imparted by teachers. By contrast, without any interest in what they are taught, students who lack in internal regulation may find the courses they attend monotonous. For example, it is not unusual to see that students are taking a nap, playing on their smartphone, or even chatting with classmates while having a class. To make it worse, some of them may even skip classes that they find boring. The reason behind this phenomenon is lack of interest in what they learn.
Secondly, selecting subjects that students like is beneficial for them to pursue a better career after graduation. As we know, with the constant change and improvement of the society in so many ways, the employment market is ever-changing. In fact, some once promising industries, such as computer engineering and mechanical automation, might become obsolete. It means that the major one chooses can not necessarily guarantee a good job in the future. Instead, it is true specialty and skills one possesses that play an essential role in hunting a decent job in a job market full of fierce competition. Apparently, only those who have passion for their major can lay a sound foundation in theoretical knowledge, which is a must for future employment. Therefore, the major catering to one’s interest can better improve one’s competitiveness in the employment market.
Admittedly, it is widely believed that science subjects seem more practical and applicable in various areas, such as medicine, construction and space technology, which are either indispensable for human life or can attracts great amount of funds. This certainly leads to a standpoint that these subjects could ensure a better career. However, some emerging industries such as the business of art are thriving as massive funds are going to these fields, which means that students who are engaged in these majors will have a better chance in achieving something than those who choose traditional science subjects for the sake of a good job.
Considering the mastering of theoretical knowledge and their career prospect, it is advisable for college students to choose subjects that they are interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2537.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25258799172 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84434225578 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.292154747 48.9658058833 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.526315789 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224606738616 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690164542227 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045866046374 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135909602467 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444131116083 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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