we can learn about the person by the books or movies he loves

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we can learn about the person by the books or movies he loves

Opinions on whether we can learn about the person by the books or movies he loves vary from person to person. Some believe that it is an appropriate way, but others are disagreed with that. As for me, I believe that a general picture of someone can be reflected by the books or movies he loves, like his characteristic or interests.
To begin with, the genre of books or movies can shed some lights of the individual's characteristic or temperament. For example, my cousin Joe, who loves to reading mystery story or watching series movies of Sherlock Holmes, tends to be quick in mind, thoughtful and careful in his study; my uncle John, who enjoys watching some fictional movie like Star War or Spider Man, believes that it could be alien or someone with superpower in the real world; my aunt, who has watched numerous of romantic Korean dramas like Korean lover or Dream high, is more likely to be emotional and committed to her dream man in the dramas, not my uncle. Besides, there are too many similar example for this point. Therefore, it is natural for someone behavior to be affected or shaped just because of some characters in the books or movies.
Additionally, the specify books or movies can tell a lot about the habit or interests of individual. Like my uncle, it is really easy to know that my uncle Joe is a great fan of Star War just according to the times he watched the Star War. Indeed, he has watched Star War for more than dozen times. What is more, he could know all the character by his heart and all the plots backward. Besides, he could decorate his study with full of elements about Star War, even against my aunt disproval. What a crazy fan my uncle is! The Star War almost is his whole life, so we always can tell a person's hobbies by the movie they love.
Admittedly, it is not always true that we can make judgement of someone just according to books or movies he or she love. However, we still can get a general picture of specify side for that person like their character or habits.
Finally, it is safe to conclude that the books or movies they love can be a way of learning about someone.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s or movies can shed some lights of the individuals characteristic or temperament. For exam...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...in the books or movies. Additionally, the specify books or movies can tell a lot about th...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
..., he has watched Star War for more than dozen times. What is more, he could know all ...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies by the movie they love. Admittedly, it is not always true that we can make j...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
... according to books or movies he or she love. However, we still can get a general pi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, as for, for example, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46529562982 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41251114342 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496143958869 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.962978784 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439172892053 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17559412324 0.076458572812 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185989686246 0.0737576698707 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329725455455 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14854984251 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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