What are advantages and disadvantages of storing information in electronic devices?
Nowadays, technology has been progressing and getting advance in our life. Besides, progressed technology obsoletes our traditional way in order to save our information. I am personally in the camp of those people who believe that we should get benefits of this technology and store our information in electronic devices. I have two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
First, technological devices provide a comfortable situation in which no longer do we need to use paper and all belonged material to paper. The advantage of reducing used paper is reduction of cutting down trees and destroying forests so that earth will be better place to live because of its clean air. Traditionally, people used to write their appointments information and all overriding data on papers and store in a place to which others could not get access. On the other hand, todays, all individuals can buy a lap tab or a mobile and save all aforementioned data. Seldom can we find a person using a drawer in order to pile up some documents. Meanwhile, people really care about their environment and do not bring about destruction of their earth. Due to this line of thought, we can have clean air because the more trees are on earth, the more our atmosphere is clean.
Second, technological devices are portable so that people do not need to settle down in a one place because of all information that they have. To elaborate, individuals like a doctor or a business owner having many pivotal information like a sort of document for their client have to stay in a one office and do not change their place because they need all previous information during a day. Todays, all people can insert their information in secure files or save in personal computers, and carry them alongside themselves throughout the world. For example, a professor can take all information of his or her experiment in order to give a lecture in an international conference and utilize them as he or she need them. Therefore, technological tools pave the way of a comfortable life for us.
In conclusion, taking in to account using technological devices renders better circumstances in to our life. It not only help people to reduce using of paper and enhance cleansing of our environment, but also do carrying of our information comfortable than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 211, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much pivotal information', 'a good deal of pivotal information'.
Suggestion: much pivotal information; a good deal of pivotal information
...ike a doctor or a business owner having many pivotal information like a sort of document for their clien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94923857868 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98008887137 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8601393084 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127324091947 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394466205734 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445603146108 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774286885284 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124763192688 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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