What are some of the qualities of good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
Our parents, perhaps, are the most important people for children during the entire life. They are our first teachers; they are the support for us when we face any problems. But who are they good parents? Which personal characteristics should a good parent have? In this essay I will try to describe some important qualities to be such kind of parent.
To begin with, I believe that to become a good parent this person should be careful and be ready to spend all his free time on his child. A true parent is even ready to refuse his own wishes and desires to bring enjoys to his child. Here I always remember my mom who was ready to devote each single minute of her life when I was small. In my childhood I visited a lot of activities as swimming, dancing, and painting. Only recently I have realized how much time my mother spent on all these, because she brought me to these classes, then she was waiting for me, after that we went home together. So, I think the sacrificing is one of important features of a good parent.
Moreover, a good parent always supports his child’s beginning. I think it is in the childhood when a baby realizes who he wants to be for the future. That’s why is quite important to limit restrictions on child’s hobbies. My mom had never been against my skateboarding, though I know that even now she is not fond of this pastime. But I think she knows how important this hobby for me.
Last but not least is that a good parent is always ready to defend his child from any danger on the planet. Children is very active, they like exploring this world, but sometimes they face some dangerous. Form my childhood I have the memory when I was attacked by the snake. I was really scared, but my mom, despite the fact she was afraid of snakes, ran and drove away the snake.
To sum up, to be a good parent is the responsible deal and there is no the formula of an ideal parent. In this essay I have just stressed some of possible qualities of good parents, which I believe the most important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, i think, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43466666667 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49980052538 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517333333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.356599213 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5909090909 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137759495243 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529418786267 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606797757397 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992726453712 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591077509526 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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