What do you like to read in your free time? For example, magazine, newspaper, or book.
Nowadays, people around the world are in constant struggle with themselves trying to choose between reading a book, magazine, newspaper or academic papers. In my opinion, I definitely prefer to read books. However, it is a difficult decision especially because the short time that the younger people have, the university or the work requires us to read specialized readings such as academic papers and research even in our free time. Even though this topic is called into question, I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First and foremost, the well-known phrase “a book is the best friend of men” is really true. Since we are children, our parents give us different books with the main main to increase our imagination, travel to other worlds through the lecture. No matter the topic of the books, because on the market we can found several options from science fiction to historical books. In my case, I really like biographic books. Nowadays, I am reading a book called “Becoming” from the former First Lady, Michelle Obama. This is a precious gift that my boyfriend give me on the last Christmas, and this book is utmost inspirational for me, especially because Mrs. Obama is one of the women that I admire all over the world.
Another important reason is that by reading books we definitely could increase our knowledge, and we will be able to be better professionals and students. On top of that, specialists in the field show through empiric evidence that people who are continually reading could improve the use of their brain in 5 percent. This kind of results helps us to be consequent with our motivation to read.
In sum, I love to read books, and I will continue reading because it helps me to be better and it is enough for me. Lastly, would recommend that governments could increase their budget on education and promote more policies and programs in order to children could enjoy with the lecture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, really, so, well, i feel, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89614243323 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73370277682 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1157458635 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172146607542 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545231972427 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411371265221 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104553953629 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452086238332 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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