Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, increasing people all over the world have the opportunity to travel to any part of the globe no matter how far it is. However, the way of traveling depends on each person. Some people prefer to travel in a group headed by a guide. Others prefer to live this experience by themselves. I disagree with the idea of being part of a travel group with strange people in a tour, for two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First and foremost, the travel experience that gives us a tour guide is limited. That is because of the tour have a standard schedule with a lot of things to do in a few hours, for that reasons is impossible that people can enjoy the experience to meet new places, monuments, churches and other relevant spaces in a city with the time pressure. For instance, I remember a family trip to Chiclayo in Peru, that was the first and only time that we pay for being part of a tour. Personally, I did not like it because of in one day we visited ten important points in the city, but it was impossible to enjoy each place and take photos.
Another important reason is that the payment for being part of a group tour is costly. That is because the majority of tours includes meals, transport, merchandising and the passes to the tourist attractions. Nevertheless, the majority of the time, this type of tours always choose the most expensive service without important if it exists cheap options. For example, some travel blogger suggests that is more affordable and exciting travel by themselves because it can save you 60% of your budget.
In sum, while some people prefer to spend their money trying to enjoy their travel headed by a tour guide, the rest of us thinking that is hugely beneficial travel themselves while we can save money and enjoying much more our trip.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59384615385 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51775047525 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.296884544 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233135345119 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830797624689 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650356271868 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138350544299 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463890589883 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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