School is one of the best part of individuals memory as a kid. The choice of selecting any one to fund education is very difficult, but it would be better to cut art and music. Kids love physical exercise , running around, getting to learn new games its fun and good experience.
Firstly, physical education can be supported by little to no funds as there are innumerable activities that can be taught to kids. Inculcating activities and events that require low cost or few number of events can be easy effective. Games like kabaddi, Kho-Kho, wrestling and many others require practically no equipments . This would there by help in reducing funds.
Another reason why I support physical activity is that, it benefits kids in many ways. For example, kids who find their passion in a game can build a strong foundation in the early age and make it a career. Also playing relieves stress from studying through the day.In general indulging in physical activity keeps the students healthy and active. This will relieve stress from studying through the day. This increase their performance in the academics.
Physical activity allows kids to make new friend, it helps them to socialise. They can meet their seniors who can help them in improving in their game or academics. This a way of making networking and show casing their talents.
To conclude we can say that, it is evident that having physical education in curriculum is of at most important which cannot be afforded to be cut due to shortage of fund. And also physical education can be taught at a very considerable amount thereby contributing for school funding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91240875912 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65641737028 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7925689503 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1764705882 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16002980813 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503000610954 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643592239223 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965899732224 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070281702738 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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