When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why?
Physical exercise is necessary for every growing student for the development of their good health. It is a real benefit that school curriculum contains physical education for their candidate. However, there are many people who believe that singing is more beneficial over physical education when there are funding crisis. According to me, the physical education is more necessary in school because of two reasons. The reasons are the development of good health of the young people and the teacher is needed to guide the physical training.
First and foremost, in the present day, it is an important criteria to the success is to build a good physic of the young generation. They are the future column of our world. If they do not have good strength, immune system and high intellect, they will not perform will. That will result poor advancement of their life and our entire country. For instance, in my school days, I did different physical exercise like running, sit up, jodding and skipping and I still continue this exercise. That's why, I am really possage a good health and youthful life. Whereas, my friend lives in different city, did not do any physical activity and causes different illness. Therefore, I strongly support that one should do physical activities and play rather that singing.
Secondly, doing physical exercise is very tough and it involves various critical steps. If anyone does not follow each and every small step as mention that causes variety of serious physical damage and weakness. For that reason, it is mandatory to do any body exercise under the guidance of a master. That will not only reduce the probability of any negative outcome but also enhance more advantages. Therefore, it is compulsory to do any types of physical activities under the observation of a trained trainer.
Finally, one can learn singing easily by attending public concerts and it is not necessary to learn singing under a teacher's guidance.
In conclusion, I agree that one should continue physical education in school when funding is concern. that is because of two reason - the physical education is necessary for a student and trainer is needed for the physical education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08033240997 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63729268747 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509695290859 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3795675491 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184731388948 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594784821472 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535563105846 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101819144373 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571442498663 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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