When you decide to find a place to travel and want to compare two places, which way do you think help you make a better decision?
- read information online
- discussing with a friend who has been to those places
Nowadays, by explosion of technology, we can surf on the Internet and
Nowadays, by explosion of technology, we can surf on the Internet and get any prerequisite information. Especially, online information is a useful resource to exploit as we have a little detail about our concern. Personally speaking, when I have to choose a place to travel, I would like to read online information to compare and make a final decision. To support my stance, following explanation will further elaborate on my perspective.
To begin with, reading online resources help people to evaluate upcoming places precisely. There are an abundance of websites which assist customers to assess the place they want to go. By using rating system, the customers can visually see the number or the stars appearing on these pages alongside the detailed description. Moreover, several comments from old clients are really valuable because they provide their great or awful experience. As a result, using online information give us a chance to have a better view.
Moreover, people can find the same question which they cast doubt on the Internet. Many social network or pages such as Facebook, Reddit, or Twitter beside traveling website can help us to attain the necessary information. Many professional travelers are willing to share their bloody experience or answer your concerned question, which gives us a good preparation for the trip. Therefore, we could have a perfect plan before enjoying a trip without any mistake.
To wrap it up, if people want to compare two different places without any knowledge, using only information is a great choice because it helps us to make a exact decision. There are a variety of websites to assess the upcoming places ,and support us to make a perfect arrangement. Therefore, Internet is a powerful source where we can gain a lack of experience from experts without paying any extra money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, therefore, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13666666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85832118559 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6944827538 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169399753896 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570260597366 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058358247348 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104853146031 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268309463779 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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