When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
• asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
• finding information about the problem using the Internet
• taking a long time to think about the problem
Use specific details and examples in your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Throughout history, the mankind face with different problems and different conditions which need comprehensive solution in order to solve and pass them. There are different ways to be used due to this fact. While some people prefer to do it by their own, others would rather get help from an elder experienced person in that particular topic. Personally, however, I believe the best way that we can use in confronting problems is to search on the internet because of several reasons. Both of which will be mentioned in the following paragraphs.
The first reason that juts out of my mind immediately pondering this issue is the fact that nowadays time is a precious asset which must be used efficiently by individuals. Therefore, it is obvious that googling that particular problem can make our solving procedure markably essier and faster. I remember when I want to search about a topic in my career, my father told me to ask my uncle, who studied a same major as I did. Thus, I went to my uncle’s house to ask him and show him my project, which was about designing of a concrete bridge. Analysis the project, he mentioned that he did not have enough knowledge about that new method of designing, so he could not help me. By doing so, not only did I not get any help but also I waste my time.
Moreover, when we face problems in our life, the most crucial thing that we need is correct and comprehecive information about it. The more information we can gather, the better perspective we will have about that specific topic. In order to find bunch of knowledge about anything there is nothing better than the internet. There are lots of tutoring video on the Youtube channels or other useful websites, help you to solve your problems without paying any money , totally free. I remember few years ago our TV did not show the picture. At first, my parents wanted to call to TV service company which would cost lots of money. I told them I can fix it, and I remember my dad laughed at me and mentioned the fact that I did not have any skill about that. After searching on the Youtube channels about our TV’s problem, and watching various giudes, finally, I found the solution and started my job. It tooks merely about 2 hours that I fixed it, which shocked my parents. In short, I am an opinion that searching on the internet can help you to find the best and correct information about any aspects of science and technology.
To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments I think the best way to find significant materials about a sobject is searching on the internet and using numerous websitets which are created to help you such as Youtube. In this way, you do not waste your time, nor do you find false information about that particular topic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62955465587 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57838724944 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8846873408 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4347826087 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4782608696 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348450077352 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968191863081 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729813716253 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220872184398 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732209971699 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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