When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
• asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
• finding information about the problem using the Internet
• taking a long time to think about the problem
It goes without saying that in this sophisticated modern era, humankind encounter a substantial number of problems in their lives and they strive to approach all of them properly. In this regard, individuals have their own preferred way of handling difficulties. The controversial question which arises here is whether to address challenges, one must surf the internet or take long time to think about problems. Meanwhile, there is a tendency toward the notion to ask someone with more experience for advice about problems. As far as I am concerned, everyone had better turn to experienced people for tackling their difficulties. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are upon hereunder.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that many of problems people have are not special and there are some individuals in our social circle who have already dealt with similar situations. To put it in other words, older people in our lives have undergone a lot of crises most of which are identical to ours and struggled to handle them, so, by turning to them we might be able to get their approaches to handling problems and resolve our difficulties perfectly. An example can drive this notion home. When I was a university freshman, I faced a dilemma choosing my optional courses. Hence, I went to a senior student for advice and his wise suggestion assisted me tremendously to make the right choice because identifying these courses is one of the biggest challenges facing first-year students in university. So, had I not referred to that senior student who had exact same challenges as me and tried extremely hard to solve it, I could not have addressed this problem rapidly and appropriately.
The second noteworthy point is that expressing challenges provides us with an opportunity to put them in perspective. To be more specific, when you have someone to share your problem with, even if they do not have a considerable piece of advice to provide you with , you are able to appraise all aspects and seriousness of your difficulty, which in turn could address that more easily. To put it in more vivid picture, after talking to one of my colleagues about losing some data in my office computer, I figured out that not only was it not important information to worry about but also I learned how to recover all of that data thoroughly. So, the more openly you talk about your predicament, the better you could handle it.
In conclusion, having aforementioned reasons and examples into account, one can infer that requesting support from experienced people for handling difficulties could be an efficient approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97716894977 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90933419988 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2954395122 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.235294118 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294279977356 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819806429999 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773284809012 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157294838474 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10166670537 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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