Which one is better learning through Books or experiences?
personally, i think that learning through experiences is the best way in compare to books or otherways.
By developing in technology, you need to improve your abilities. there are a lot of ways for learning such as Network, newspaper, books, ... . It depends on you to choose your best way.
First, when you become an experienced person , definitely you can be sure about who you are and know your weak points or abilities. For example, when i had graduated from universities, i was seeking for a job in the advertisements. what i got through searching was that the most of the companies want expert who has 3-4 related experience with that position. so I found that whether i have learnt in the university but i need to try in the other way and not just learning theory. we cannot overlook the impact of parents in our lives. The best way, you can get experience is through your parents who help you to grow up and they were beside us in all of our experiences when we were child and we couldnt walk or even talk. they helped us to learn how walk nonetheless we fall down for hundred times but they didn't be disappointed. we should be like our parents.
Moreover, Actually i believe that reading books not only can help you improve your power to think and make a decision in your life but also you can use others experience by reading books. besides, researches and scientists explain their failures and triumph in their books for whom they want to continue their way in different ways. For example, when you read psychology books, you can detect your faults and improve your relations and see its impact in your job.
To sum up, Although you cannot change your experiences with anything, you should know that for learning new things there is no excuse. if you want to explore so come on and start from something. when you get valuable experiences, you can be an author who shares golden strategies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62721893491 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62398950144 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1889880702 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129641385193 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510096834722 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763025510475 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114119190663 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104629860571 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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