which one better to work close to your home or to live far away from your work with high salary? which one you would like ? and why?
Hectic life has a tremendous impact on people's life. Some individuals like to work in any place in order to collect money. From my vantage point, I believe that the salary is not important to me. I would like to live near my job for the following reasons.
To begin with, Living near your job help workers to save their afford. living in a near distance could reduce people's tension. For example, I am working in a dental clinic as a dental hygenist. My work location is about 5 miles away from my resident. I need just 10 minutes to reach my work destination. I wake up early and prepare my breakfast with my family every day. Also, I am performing some physical activities because a have a lot of spare time. On the other hand, My co-worker lives in far away area. He drives for more than hours to reach his job. He can not perform any things before he comes to the work location. In addition, He reaches to the work tired and on stress from the road's traffic. Before a few days, he came with a headache from the street crowding. Now, He thinks in leave his job in order to have less life's tension.
Secondly, living in a faraway destination is more expensive for laborers. Employees' commitments will increase. For instance, if workers live in a long-distance location, they will pay more money for many expenses. They should pay for the car's fuel, car's maintenance, Toll, pay way to reach their work fast, for paying food because they do not have time to cook or to come back for their home to eat their lunch break. All these commitments will need more money from workers. As a result, if the employes pay a good salary for their workers, workers will pay it a lot of for their life's commitments. On the other hand, the low salary price with a short distance for workers could help them to save money because they do not have a lot of responsibilities.
To wrap it, contemplating for all aforesaid reasons, Working in a near distention have more benefits for laborers than
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
... job help workers to save their afford. living in a near distance could reduce peoples...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52908587258 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55026132848 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518005540166 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3598459843 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.44 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159047635099 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514090441836 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398110754982 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100945011113 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523702450854 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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