Which one do you prefer? Why?
–a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects
but less vacation days or
–another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and
interesting but has more vacation days.
The quality of workplace has recently become the focus of increased attention and people, for years have sought to identify which parameters excel their job condition. In this regard, although some people think that their job should include a large number of vacations wich is not callenges, I believe a job with more challenging, though less vacation, is more suitable for two main reason which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, a job which is challenging makes people more satisfied. Personally speaking, Having a job which is not challenging makes people bored and if they work does not tail any interesting projects, they will get tired and disappointed. In other words, when people do a same task all the time without any challenges to evalute themselves, they think of that job as the routine of their lives which is really monotonous. My own experience is compelling example of this, during my bachelor, I had to work in a company as an accontant, my task was the same all the time without any challenging and interesting objectives, because of this, I could not withstand that job and left there, since I it was really boring, and this experience taught me that the job should contain a lot of challenges to make employees satisfied.
Second, I am of the opinion that a job which contain a lot of vacation is distracting. As a matter of fact, some people, just like me prefer to concentrate on their tasks carefully and a lot of vacations distract them. To paint it in a more vivid picture, they like to give their full attention to their projects, no matter they are interesting or not, they like to do their best and a lot of small vacations donot let them do so. For example, after graduation from university, I was working in a lab which was accompanied by a lot vacations. To tell the truth, not only me, but also all my partners could not do our projects well, since we were not able to concentrate on our task consistently, and after every vacation we had to do some parts of our reaserch and expriments from begin due to the fact that we had forgotten tham during vacations.
Finally, as has been mentioned above, I firmly believe that a job should contain a lot of challenges and less vacations. Since vacations make people distracted from their duties, and challenges are an obligatory part of a favaroble jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ple think that their job should include a large number of vacations wich is not callenges, I beli...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vacations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... should contain a lot of challenges and less vacations. Since vacations make people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, well, for example, as a matter of fact, first of all, in other words, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70048309179 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78536246589 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4964997552 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.692307692 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8461538462 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237954545067 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990383459587 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455094772553 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15100034649 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223756328003 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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