Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success at university? Tutors in university The encouragement from family and friends High-quality education from high school
In modern century education in one of the most important facts to have a successful life and career in the future. The last and hardest level of education is being at the university. Now, this is important how the students can be successful when they are at university. personally, I think, having a knowledgeable background can be beneficial. I am going to explore more on this topic in the following essay.
Initially, having a strong background have a lot of benefits. According to this, high-level high school has a pivotal role in this circumstance. To illustrate more, students, who are more knowledgeable and they had been in high-quality schools, they are more prepared for hard studying. Moreover, they are able to improve their skills despite professors' requirements and assignments. Thus, they can achieve more than other students.
Secondly, having a high-quality background in high school can help students to have a strong resume for part-time jobs while they are still at the university. Most high-quality schools have some activities and workshops, despite their unique arrangement. Students can learn more and get influence on these workshops, and use that resume for part-time jobs.
Last but not list, with high-quality background from high school, students are able to write more qualification essays and some, perhaps, ISI lectures and articles. These subjects will enter them to any university in the world that they want and they can go to high-ranked universities.
In conclusion, students, who had been in high-level high school are more knowledgeable and successful in their universities and their finals.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...successful when they are at university. personally, I think, having a knowledgeable backgr...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3166023166 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12225610369 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7769679529 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282639852071 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933330707168 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726890115359 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172394858622 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447506875765 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...successful when they are at university. personally, I think, having a knowledgeable backgr...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3166023166 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12225610369 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7769679529 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282639852071 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933330707168 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726890115359 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172394858622 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447506875765 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.