Which one of the following do you prefer to choose/find a successful job?
• Asking the opinions of others (real-life and online friends)
• Sending letters to the company
• Looking for information on the internet or advertisements in the newspaper
Without a shadow of a doubt, nowadays, there are a lot of people who are looking for an appropriate job, which is aligned either with their field of study or their interests. Taking on a successful job therefore is competitive in this case, due to a large number of applicants. There are, however, some helpful ways that pave the way for getting a job such as consulting with others, contacting the company, and searching on the internet. If I had a chance to search for a job, I would prefer to use online sources such as the internet for some reason, which I will illustrate in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, job is one of the vital aspects of people’s lives, and the invention of the internet has had a great effect on it. People have easy access to a large variety of information, where they can meet their needs. Some different sites add advertisements within their daily, weekly, semi-monthly, or monthly reports, asking and inviting people looking for a job to enroll in them. By regularly checking these sites, people would increase their chance of getting a job. As a personal experience, last year, I graduated with a Master’s degree, and I had more free-times after graduation, and I intended to do something. So, I decided to search for a job via the internet and check whether there is any available position fitting my plans or not. I saw some requirements for a part-time job, which was convincing to me. Collecting further information, finally, I had been able to decide to apply for that. After a week, I received a reportage of the company's final decision concerning my acceptance. But unfortunately, because of the COVID-19 pandemic, I was not able to enter that job. This example would illustrate how using the internet is an easy way and beneficial to find a career.
The other impetus that I prefer to use the internet in order to seek a job is that the internet is one of the inseparable parts of my daily activities. During the day, I am working with a laptop, writing my academic paper, chatting with my friends, reading the news, watching movies, and so on. Indeed, I am a curious person, and I am very comfortable with searching on the internet or dealing with an extended amount of data. Some people are as much against using the internet as I am for it. So, this information might explain the reason for my choice.
All in all, I would rather opt for the internet in the case that I am looking for a job. As I mentioned above this choice is due to the easy access to some amount of reliable information in the various sites and overusing of the internet during a day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ore is competitive in this case, due to a large number of applicants. There are, however, some he...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable searching'.
Suggestion: comfortable searching
...d, I am a curious person, and I am very comfortable with searching on the internet or dealing with an exte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61884368308 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78506144869 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494646680942 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1004109315 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0454545455 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2272727273 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240565317632 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712247779419 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520833392115 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151757743717 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323367115309 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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