Which one of the following do you prefer to do in order to find a successful job Asking the opinions of others real life and online friends Sending letters to the company Looking for information on the internet or advertisements in the newspaper

Essay topics:

Which one of the following do you prefer to do in order to find a successful job?
• Asking the opinions of others (real-life and online
friends)
• Sending letters to the company
• Looking for information on the internet or
advertisements in the newspaper

Nowadays, It is crystal clear that finding a proportionate job is according to their attitude and dream for everyone. Every individual has a distinctive characteristic in education, talent, and experiments that will need a fitting job. Finding my consider job by advertisement searching on the jobs resources websites and jobs parts that enclosed to prestigious press is more appealing. For the following paragraphs, I will explore my perspective to advocate my reasons.
First and foremost, the press and media are prevalent between every stratum in the society that it has paved the best way to find job opportunities. Everyone can post the required employee in a part of the newspaper and maybe find the best-fitted case for the position. The job searcher can find plenty of job by surfing on internet or reading the jobs oppurtunities in the newspapers in hands down. Conversly, sending letters to unknown is seems useless because I do not know which company will need an employee such me. Also, It is stressful and time-consumig to send a bunch of letter to many companies. The other option to find a job by take advice form others is very unfortunate or unpropablible because every person would have a specific experiment and idea that maybe do not working for me.
Another noteworthy in corroborating my stance is the diversity of jobs in this way. I can compare different jobs in terms of wages, location, and requirements, which would be exploring on the newspapers and internet that is very appealing to me. My own example is compelling evidence of my reason. As a newly graduated student with a master's degree, I have been searching a proper job by asking from the previous professor, friends, and others. It is very hopeless for me not to be functional in this method. By coincidence, one of my friends suggested to me to search on the internet and newspaper. Eventually, I can find different job vacancies by surfing the internet and newspaper; I can choose the best option job position.
To draw a comprehensive conclusion through the reasons mentioned earlier, finding a job from advertisements from the internet and newspaper is my inclination. According to my experiment and education, I can fiscally find a well-fitted job, hands down.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Independent TOEFL Writing

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of jobs'.
Suggestion: plenty of jobs
...the position. The job searcher can find plenty of job by surfing on internet or reading the j...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun letter seems to be countable; consider using: 'a bunch of letters'.
Suggestion: a bunch of letters
... is stressful and time-consumig to send a bunch of letter to many companies. The other option to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.024 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12708483344 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7599723611 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265643105928 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821410039071 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448181437196 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164018541244 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547532328703 0.0645574589148 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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