Which one of the following do you prefer to do in order to find a successful job?
• Asking the opinions of others (real-life and online
friends)
• Sending letters to the company
• Looking for information on the internet or
advertisements in the newspaper
Nowadays, It is crystal clear that finding a proportionate job is according to their attitude and dream for every one. Every individuals have a distinctive property in terms of education, talent and experiments which is will need fitted job. For me, finding my consider job by advertismesnt searching on the jobs resources websites and jobs parts that enclosed to prestigious press is more appealing. For the following paragraphs I will explore my perspective to advocate my reasons.
First and foremost, the prees and media are prevalent between every stratum in the society that it pave the best way to advertisement. Everyone can post the required employee in a part of newspaper and maybe find the best fitted case for the position. Also, the job searcher can find plenty of job bu surfing on internet or reading the jobs oppurtunities in the newspapers in hands down. Conversly, sending letters to unknown is seems useless because I do not know which company will need an employee such me. Also, It is stressful and time-consumig to send a bunch of letter to many companies. The other option to find a job by take advice form others is very unfortunate or unpropablible because every person would have a specific experiment and idea that maybe do not working for me.
ANother noteworthy in corroborating my stance is that diversity of jobs. I can compare different jobs in terms of wages, location, requirments which would be explore on the newspapers and interenet that is very appealing to me. My own example is compelling evidence to my reason. As I new graduated student from master degree, I was been searching a proper job by asking from the previuos professor, friends and others. It is very hopeless for me to not be functional this method. By coincidene, one of my friends suggested to me to search in the internet and newspaper. Eventulaly, I can find different job vacancy by surfing the internet and newspaper; I can choose the best option job position.
To draw an comprehensive conclusion, since the aforementioned couple of reasons, finding a job from by advertisments from the internet and newspaper is my inclination. I can find a well-fitted job according to my experiment and education in a fiscal wasy hands down.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...their attitude and dream for every one. Every individuals have a distinctive property...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of jobs'.
Suggestion: plenty of jobs
...sition. Also, the job searcher can find plenty of job bu surfing on internet or reading the j...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun letter seems to be countable; consider using: 'a bunch of letters'.
Suggestion: a bunch of letters
... is stressful and time-consumig to send a bunch of letter to many companies. The other option to ...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: I_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knew' (past of "to know")?
Suggestion: knew
... compelling evidence to my reason. As I new graduated student from master degree, I...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...graduated student from master degree, I was been searching a proper job by asking from t...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the best option job position. To draw an comprehensive conclusion, since the afo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96286472149 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04876671876 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506631299735 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.515393483 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4736842105 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262559022558 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789682498791 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481290799561 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161682013479 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481231203909 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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