Which one of the following do you prefer to do in order to find a successful job a Asking the opinions of others real life and online friends b Sending letters to the company c Looking for information on the internet or advertisements in the newspaper | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Which one of the following do you prefer to do in order to find a successful job?
a. Asking the opinions of others (real-life and online friends)
b. Sending letters to the company
c. Looking for information on the internet or advertisements in the newspaper

Finding good job opportunities is the most important pillar of each society in today’s world. As we live in a chaotic and fast-paced world, finding better job offers is harder. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether we should find a job through advertisements in the newspaper or the Internet, or asking for other opinions or whether sending a letter to the company. Some people possess the conviction that asking other people’s opinion or sending letters to the company are more fruitful, whereas, I think looking for information on the Internet or advertisements is more beneficial. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.

The first reason coming to mind elucidating standpoint is that searching on the Internet has some financial benefits for us; It is a more convenient way to find a better job on the Internet without any cost. In particular, we spend less time finding a suitable job which fits to our skills. The driving force behind a good candidate’s success is their ability to find wise ways to solve their problems. Sending a letter to the company is a process of trial and error; because the human resources do not spend much time on our letter especially when they do not have empty positions. Consider my experience to make this point more clear. When I was looking for a job, I used Internet advertising to get information about last-updated jobs. It remarkably did not need a lot of costs and with just a simple click I obtained a mass of jobs which I could filter those who were not aligned with my field and abilities.

The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that using the Internet makes us get more information about jobs. It is more to the point than asking other people's opinions. Consider social media which helps us to get better job offers. We can search and post on LinkedIn and many Human resources and recruiters send a message to use. Thus, we can find a suitable job offering by weighing the companies and employees with each other. We can also ask the workers who work in that company about their experiences and it will broaden our horizons.

In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think searching on the Internet’s advertisements has more benefits for us, we can pay less money and access a lot of information about the company and employees. It is anticipated if we want to find good job opportunities, using social media and the Internet will help us efficiently in two other ways.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, i think, in brief, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84009009009 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86383328218 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497747747748 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4825430757 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.45 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33068496678 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953641111691 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683877633352 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209104586162 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673610171551 0.0645574589148 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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