Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
Helping and volunteering are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact we live in a fast-paced and chaotic world, it is important for us to help other people in order to improve our notions. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether people are more willing to help other people in all kinds of ways recently, or whether they were more helpful in previous years. Some people possess the conviction the latter attributes have occurred whereas I think the former is more beneficial. To substantiate my point of view the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that helping other people can increase our mood. Although helping people has some benefits for poverty people, we can use the pleasing and agreeable feeling that brings for us. Some feelings like responsibility, kindness, and a sense of awareness can improve and enhance through helping other people. Consider a charity that creates a comfortable zone for homeless people. Recently, our people have been getting to grips with helping poverty people and creating for their organization that is non-profit and non-governmental. Poverty people especially women can stay a night in these suites and they can access the rights of humanity. I can example of the famous organization, Women In Need, which is a local institute where women and children can stay free.
The second rational reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that recently, thanks to the creation of such NGOs and organizations, people can do some volunteer work and enhance their communication. It goes without saying that the main role of these organizations is to help people besides boosting people’s social cycle. Thys, we can help other people and actually make new friends. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. A few years ago, I joined a volunteer charity and I was in charge of organizing each portion of the charity. There were different salesmen and supplements that sold different objects. I connected to each of them directly and recognized a new plan for this issue. It was definitely a good experience.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think recently, people are more willing to help other people because they found this helps them to feel better and more confident about themself and also, connect with new people and make friends. It is anticipated that if all people take part in such activities, humankindness and unity will go through the roof.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0976744186 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84162447161 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516279069767 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8110710921 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335406243387 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928545433146 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812342595129 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227996750627 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540502525547 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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