Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively?
- Having an environment which is free of noise and distractions
- Knowing that you will receive a reward
- Doing something you are interested in
Having appropriate work has always been markedly important for human from the beginning. Even though, this appropriate work has just a main goal which is summarized in how productive a job can be. As much more people advantage physically, economically or mentally from a profession, they indicate that more beneficial. At this point, a spread spectrum of opinions discusses between individuals. Some believe the job atmosphere is the most important, whereas others emphasize on how they will be exalted from hardworking as long as the third group see the feeling of a worker about that job the most important base. I personally experienced that how you feel about your job is the most highlighted. Accordingly, I will try to explain my reasons focused on an individual mentally changes in further paragraphs.
First of all, one of the elementary results of being in love with your job is absolutely how it can turn you into a more creative version of yourself. I remember the days I had a gymnastics class with little children. With the end of every session, I felt motivated to search, create or find a new type of warm-up not only because it enhanced my class qualification expeditiously but also because it could change the children’s mood completely too. They were such excited, happy and encouraged that I felt that happiness in my soul too. That’s why I believe innovation comes across with you if you love your job and this in term led you to be a more qualified employee with more positive outcomes.
Apart from the point I made above, the particles that make a person work for long hours with no exhaustion are varied but with a very strong absolute, I am claiming that the more you love your job, the less you become tired. The reason why I decided to become a trainer in my life way only and only that this job never made me tired. I never feel like I want to end my class so fast; I just want them to be continued or have a lot of them repeatedly. For sure the main core of this passion would not be found except in the feeling I have about gymnastics. I feel I was born to live and breath with that. Is it possible for anyone to breath without oxygen? The gymnastics play this role for me! I think this reason is enough justifying for everyone to continue their profession more purposefully.
To make a long story short, in my opinion, It’s not only necessary but also fundamental for each person to find out more about his/her interests at the first step of job searching and then decide about it since a job would not be only a part of life but also the main part which we spend many precious hours in that looking for the best productivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat looking for the best productivity.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, so, then, third, whereas, apart from, i feel, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62133891213 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72296629407 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514644351464 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6637461714 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.45 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14573192827 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437911146813 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505955919583 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888236756324 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440263217268 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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