Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Dangerous sports or activities are generally classified as one in which your life might be at risk. There are many such activities and people do those with passion and enthusiasm. I have tried to answer the question; Why people do it and put their lives at risk, the life for which they do so much and struggle every day.
First, It's fun and enjoyable. Out of people's daily routine and daily life, these activities give them an extraordinary experience which makes them do these activities also these are so much fun. For example activities like parasailing, bungee jumping, deep-sea diving, mountain trekking, wildlife photography, etc. All these activities provide a unique and mesmerizing experience which I believe is worth taking the risk.
For some individuals doing these activities are passion and dreams. for example for wildlife photographers the risk is worth it as the photos and experience they get each time are priceless. similarly, the mountaineers trek and climb big structures like Mount Everest and gain wonderful experience and fulfill their dreams.
Not just experience nowadays people have been encouraged by government and tourist companies, People are even paid for such activities. For example, many companies sponsor and pay a stipend to the mountaineer to get train and trek the mountain. Also, there are so many television channels like discovery and animal planets who pay hosts to go to jungles and carry out various shows, including surviving along in jungle or dealing with dangerous animals in jungle and ocean.
In conclusion, It's passion, fun, satisfaction and sometimes money which attracts people to do dangerous sports or activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, similarly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29962546816 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81159928634 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6574261941 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215370276448 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773595042386 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671092582301 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133145561396 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759755409236 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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