Why go to university?
Nowadays, especially in the technologically world, going to university could be a necessity for a lot of people especially whose attend to have a high powered work. There are a lot of reasons for going to university. Two most important of reasons that are discussed in the following paragraphs are having better chances for their careers and preparing themselves as an influential researcher.
The clearest reason for going to university is to have better chances of employments. In fact, some people studying at university especially in some majors that are more practical to have more chances for employment in companies or authorities. After they graduated from university, they can get together their CV and apply for the job that pay brilliant. In some position high powered jobs that make more money having a degree is essential. Therefore, they can to make more money.
The other reason is that some people are fond of researching. They have to go to university to study the major that they want to research on it. In fact, they have to go to university because of being many researchers as a member of faculty in university. They go to university to study there and know how they can research. Also, universities have a lot of equipment in their laboratory. They can use this equipment in their research free. In additional, they can have their result to check out by the professors.
To sum up, everyone has a purpose for going to university. But it seems that going to university not only is useful for making more money but it also is very useful for researchers.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216216216216 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.165540540541 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743243243243 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506756756757 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0641891891892 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135135135135 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0439189189189 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91068699201 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0641891891892 0.0309702414327 207% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00675675675676 0.00188951952338 358% => OK
Determiners: 0.0709459459459 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0202702702703 0.0209618222197 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168918918919 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1576.0 2387.08602151 66% => OK
No of words: 270.0 408.028673835 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83703703704 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22962962963 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188888888889 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162962962963 0.112833075102 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91068699201 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.1756410464 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8823529412 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8455611002 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7058823529 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 38.8453159041 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.40963855422 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311280742498 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157193315251 0.103427244359 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107070982187 0.0752933317313 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535340954924 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151476679535 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142894923588 0.114077575197 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132385035756 0.0781384742642 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346968196122 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107741975127 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213293593409 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679002446052 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.