The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today’s world?
The twentieth century is noticed by invention of the computer and the Internet. This have been changed quality of people`s life tremendously. As a pharmacist, I think that the access to a variety of the information from the Internet enhanced people`s satisfaction in life.
First, the access to the information, provided on the web, saves time. Nowadays, almost everyone has a device, connected to the Internet. It lets people to find answers to any question they have. Moreover, they can do it barely in seconds. For example, as an old graduate of a pharmaceutical school, I had plenty of a material to refresh in my memory, in order to pass a professional pharmaceutical exam in the United States. I was able to accomplish it in a short period of time by searching the information on the Internet. On the other hand, if I had used printed materials and visited the library, I could have spent months on the preparation. So, by using the Internet, I was capable to reach my goal very fast.
Next, using of the Internet is a great way to increase intelligence. There are a lot of different kind of encyclopedias and websites with scientific content are available on the Internet. In turn, all the information from these sources can be used by professionals. For instance, from the Internet I can learn about new medication every day and grow up as a professional. It helps me to stay updated and serve to my patients in the best way. Although, the information about the innovations could be found in special printed magazines, very often the materials lack of details and crucial facts. Therefore, the high level of the information on the web helps me to learn more.
Finally, the Internet lets people to find a job. These days, most of the employers post vacant job`s positions they have almost exclusively on the Internet. This way, if a person is looking for a job, he is capable to compare a plenty of offers and find the one he is interested in. My own experience is a great example of that. In fact, a few months ago, I found a position in a pharmacy I was searching for. Moreover, I was completely satisfied with the location and the salary I was offered. So, a variety of jobs on the Internet gave me a chance to got hired by the pharmacy I wanted to work for.
To conclude, the availability of the information from the Internet helps people to excel. This is because it saves time for people, expands their intellectual abilities, and helps with employment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... I was able to accomplish it in a short period of time by searching the information on the Int...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l abilities, and helps with employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71954022989 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00724979471 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1744360898 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.037037037 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81481481481 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240652984679 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066291382682 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677692539059 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151479501302 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714337467194 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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