The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today’s world?
Today, we live in modern world where new innovations have changed our lives a lot. One of them is a wonderful technology of internet. By the use of internet services, people can get all kinds of news right away, businesses have improved a lot, and education is easy now.
First of all, people can get news from throughout the world right away through the internet services. We do not need to wait for daily newspaper or certain news timings of different channels on television. We can just turn on our computer and get the news easily. Especially, weather information is in our hands now because of the smartphones. I have a weather app on my Iphone on which every morning I usually check the weather before getting out from the bed so I can dress up myself according to the weather because in new england where I live weather changes every other day.
Furthermore, internet brings wonderful improvement in business world also. Now different companies can do businesses throughout the world with collaboration through internet. For example, on of my friends have an import and export business. Most of his business is with China. China is in different time zone so my friend keeps open his business at night-time so he can contact business people in China right away through computers without wasting time. In this way he is doing very well in his business.
Moreover, computer technology brought great things in education system also. Now students are using computers in schools for different school work. Students are using computers at home for their study now. They can send their assignment online now which is a wonderful thing for them In addition, tutor help on internet made parents life very easy. For example, my older sister have three children and they are all school going age. She used to drop her children after school to some teachers house for homework help and then she had to go back pick them up from that place everyday, but now her children can get homework help through tutor.com, which made my sister's life very easy now. Besides this, availability of low fees online classes have increased higher education rate among people. I remember one of my college friends couldn’t finished his higher education because he couldn’t afford high tuition fees, but now after few years he finished his education by getting low fee online classes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...wonderful improvement in business world also. Now different companies can do busines...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rought great things in education system also. Now students are using computers in sc...
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Line 7, column 575, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...to go back pick them up from that place everyday, but now her children can get homework ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92039800995 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59675281268 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5548040829 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109758166427 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371997424033 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319583603769 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704571345889 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203841315615 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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