Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowaday, workers working all time in companies or factors. Work is essential part of their life. It is undeniable that work time must be a flexible and satisfaction for workers.
Some people believe it is better that worker doing many different tasks during the workday vice versa, others say it is preferable that workers do similar tasks all day long. I am agree with first statement. I will elaborate my claim in next paragraph.
The first equisite reason to be mentioned is learning more. When a worker who working in a place need to learn various tasks. Having multi skill not only is neccessary for the workers but also, it could improve their positions or suggest higher level of work for them. Plus, when a worker doing multi tasks they acquire this ability to do wide range of tasks solely; Acctually, this condition make her/his work simply when her/his co-workers are absence. My own experience is a complete parable in this case. When I was a college student I had a part time job, I was working in a hardware company. Many times I was working alone and no one dont exist in our company except my boss. I was compel various part of works; therefore, I was doing many duties. Finlly, I have learned many skills that have made me a flexible workers that could work in nomurious job opportionities.
The second reason I must mention this, is having attractive time. When a worker doing diversity tasks in his work he don’t feel tiredness, owing to, multiple duties are amusement and prevent the sense of boring. For instance, If you were a web desinger, it was very tedious to do working only with PC, you must doing other works to emit attractness in your job. The new study at the Job and Economic Institute at Londen university depited that more than 75 percent of worker who working various duties are more gleeful than other workers that they do only one task all day long. Forthermore, this study clarify, many employer need a employee that they have multiple skills in their works, their reasoning is these workers are attractive and potent. Hence, mixed duties in workers is a positive point for them. Never don’t feel you various tasks in your work is dramatic.
In short, based aformentioned; althought, some workers intrested in a usual work during their work time; In my view, Having a work with different tasks is better, because it make a condition for learning more in one hand, and provide an attractive time for workers on the other hand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... believe it is better that worker doing many different tasks during the workday vice versa, o...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...rs do similar tasks all day long. I am agree with first statement. I will elaborate ...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eason to be mentioned is learning more. When a worker who working in a place need t...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e. When I was a college student I had a part time job, I was working in a hardware compa...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y times I was working alone and no one dont exist in our company except my boss. I ...
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Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'compelled'.
Suggestion: compelled
...st in our company except my boss. I was compel various part of works; therefore, I wa...
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Line 3, column 829, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...ny skills that have made me a flexible workers that could work in nomurious job opport...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[2]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
...r doing diversity tasks in his work he don’t feel tiredness, owing to, multiple duti...
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Line 4, column 639, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... this study clarify, many employer need a employee that they have multiple skill...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... different tasks is better, because it make a condition for learning more in one ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in short, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91972477064 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67692976975 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9081721796 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2608695652 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321031489271 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894536051487 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094586803081 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19059350913 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107115945655 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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