Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that all people are looking for a sense of satisfaction in their life. Working is one of the most important aspects of people's life that profoundly affects their contentment. Some people think doing various types of tasks during a workday is more satisfying than doing a similar task for whole the workday for workers. On the other hand, others stand on the other side of the continuum, believing that doing the same tasks is more desirable. I, personally, concur with the former group, for a couple of reasons which are elaborated in the future paragraphs.
First, doing the same task all day long would be tedious for everyone. Psychologically speaking, individuals incline to make some changes in their daily life; for example, they prefer to eat different foods, communicate with different people, change the home's decoration. This attribute also is true about their job which they spend a large amount of their life on it. When ones do a single task for whole the day, there is nothing to make them refresh and so, gradually they will be like robots. They do not have any creativity and innovation in their work because due to the monotony of the task, they do not need such characteristics. Additionally, if a worker is reluctant to accomplish a given duty and he has to do it for the whole day, it would be torture for him. Differently, when they do different tasks, it is highly probable that they like some of those stipulated tasks more than others which provides diversity that leads to staying productive.
Second, doing the same task all day, workers lose their concentration on the task. When people start to work, initially, they pay all their attention to the task, but when they do a single task for hours, they gradually get used to doing it, and then they lose their concentration unconsciously. As a result of this, they are more likely to hurt themselves during the work especially, in the last hours of the workday that they feel bored and fatigued. There are many workers at the factories that because of the lack of attention put their hands in the machines and then hurt themselves severely that most of these injuries are irreparable. Hence, I believe that the workers should be given various tasks during the day because, in this way, they need to pay attention to the new task, and it helps them to stay conscious during the day and impedes them from being injured.
Finally, having different skills and abilities, people have the opportunity for finding a better job. Most of the workers avidly want to develop their experiences and skills at work to be versatile in a particular area. The workers who learn various skills at work are more likely to overcome the competitors in job interviews. For example, when one in a factory learns the operation of different machines, thanks to his broadened experiences, he has more chances to find an appropriate job position in the future. So, he will not turn into unemployed which is advantageous for him.
All in all, with the two mentioned reasons into account, I, firmly assert that workers should do different tasks during the day because, in this situation, in addition to staying fresh and productive during the workday, they do not lose their concentration and stay safe, and have more opportunity to find a job in the future as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'homes'' or 'home's'?
Suggestion: homes'; home's
...icate with different people, change the homes decoration. This attribute also is true...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2774.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 575.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82434782609 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68172334062 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448695652174 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7009154314 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.608695652 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451959603896 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137168330723 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113530762 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269089951359 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104739736735 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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