It goes without saying that people have been engaging in different types of jobs to earn their livelihood in this sophisticated and progressing world where we live. A hot debate has been conducted among many people that whether doing similar tasks during a workday is more satisfactory or practicing different tasks leads them to be more fulfilled. From my perspective, if someone performs different activities, wil be more gratified rather than clinging to do the same duty constantly. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
First, dissimilar activities induce reciprocal reactions with various parts of the brain, which means every movement and thought is linked to a specific or intricate brain segment. Doing a single activity repeatedly during a workday gives rise to the same electrical activity pattern in one's brain. In contrast, different tasks are assigned to different hemispheres of the brain, according to the neurologists. That provides employees with the golden opportunity to activate both of their brain's hemispheres, and switching between different tasks literally means splitting the tasks between different parts of the brain. A s a result, the employees become less tired at the end of the day, and their higher level of energy keeps them more satisfied. Please put it in other words, if we do divergent tasks during a workday, not necessarily one part of the brain is involved, and this point defines that we seem to remain energized till the end of the work time. The satisfaction is scientifically associated with not being fatigued. Variety in doing tasks inhibits the whole brain parts from being indulged; Hence, we survive our brain activity vividly even after a work time. Moreover, being bored will not happen since task variation hinders us from being bored. An example drives this notion home. I have been working as a facialist in a cosmetic clinic for 10 years. Every day I became busy with the diverse process of different tasks and did learn not only myriad points but also every new activity would be exhilarating.
Another exquisite reason worth mentioning is that one of the most common personal values among different people is their inclination toward helping individuals. Having gained different skills at the work-place enables them to help different people in different circumstances to overcome their hurdles. That brings about a sense of achievement whenever they help a person, which increases their satisfaction significantly. Taking my experience as an example. I learned so many different and employable skills to help others in some hazardous situations when I worked in a nursery clinic. l.e. manage an ulcer due to burning, stitching a laceration with minimum facilities, and repair a crushed skin in accidents. All help me to feel how useful I am in our life and job as well .on the other hand, if I only adhered to learn and to do just one task and ignored other skills, maybe I obtained some solitary experience in one field, but that was narrow and could not guarantee my happy feeling in the job and social life. Ergo, being versatile in your work-place, is going to be a critical idea that is directly associated with your satisfaction.
In conclusion, having considered all the aforementioned reasons and illustrations into account, it is a foregone inference that doing various tasks during a workday regarding its desirable outcomes, such as being exuberant and mentally fulfilled, has a more meaningful relationship with a worker's satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3025.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 581.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2065404475 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92906995908 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 317.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545611015491 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 944.1 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2883767562 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.24 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314070064307 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757983761131 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624714301275 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215105107539 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681902024639 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 86.8835125448 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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