Students in the university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year. Which one of the following is the best, and explain why? A. help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics. B. help people who can not afford to build or rent a house to build a house. C. visit and assist the elderly with daily tasks.
Sympathy is a vital feature that may not set only some particular tasks in society. It is a tough job to choose things meaningful enough to do each year. Club members will have different ideas on various alternations; still, helping others is one of the most altruistic responsibilities in all communities. Hence, when it comes to helping a particular group, in my opinion, assisting the elderly in their daily tasks is supposed to be a critical selection.
First, having a healthy society is the realistic or favourable goal all countries consider. Helping the elderly can be a profound characteristic in all societies o have a real healthy one. Suppose people try to enhance their social rebounding by supporting older individuals. In that case, the community will consider spiritual and physical compensation, since they build a circle that everyone does the best to compensate for anyone's weakness. It is widely explicit that older people are the ones who need to receive support in their diverse life dimensions. For example, they need to be provided with emotional support on one side and aid physically or medically on the other side. We all in the track of ageing, accordingly rendering dedicated altruistic assistance may provide us with the same in our ageing period, which means the juvenile and young adults learn to help the elderly voluntarily. Helping older people help to lead to create a positive feature of humanity itself.
Second, the other advantage in helping older people is something that somewhat subtle, still is true. When you allow an older one in their daily tasks they recompense your aid in other ways; for instance, they have numerous experiences in different aspects, since they have already passed the life that no one else recognizes it, and you can gain its real fortune by hearing their stories and pieces of advice, Older people's memories are unwritten and invaluable history. If you reflect them, those stories are there to help you in a variety of attitudes. They can identify many solutions to life troubles, motivation, encouragement, and help you let go of unworthy issues or trials and tribulations since they have already fulfilled the same. Ergo, it will be a matter of assisting older individuals and getting help from them.
In conclusion, we all live in a society that can not divide it with merely young and older people and construe that they need us to live; however, we need them, as mentioned above. Therefore, we had better make a homogenized community that every individual can get and provide some assistance. The real beauty is true altruism, and nothing else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 1373.03311258 160% => OK
No of words: 435.0 270.72406181 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80144348727 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 145.348785872 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547126436782 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 419.366225166 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.812803267 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.95 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 4.33554083885 415% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280730914908 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830236986249 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530862626107 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16233889029 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549697686817 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 63.6247240618 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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