Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasksto do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long,use epecific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human beings have been engaging in various activities and tasks to provide life necessities. Recently there has been a hot debate among many people about the very notion that whether accomplishing a similar task during the workday is more satisfactory for the workers or different types of tasks in a single working day might be efficacious for them. I hold the view that similar errands and tasks can better satisfy workers. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that being engaged in a similar task will open the doors of expertise to the workers .in other words, workers in any career or occupation, being a constructor, an employee working in an enterprise, a chef, or an assortment of other careers, work elongated hours during various workdays on a specified task, it will improve his or her experience to a great extent. An example can drive this notion home. I have worked as a chef of a fast-food restaurant for more than five years, where the only served food was a special hamburger with a unique, personal recipe. I have been preparing this special sandwich for five years, which put me in a prestigious place and rank among all other fast food centers in my city. The only reason that has led to my success and reputation lies in the fact that I have gained noticeable experience about the food I made, the customers' tastes and desires.
Moreover, doing the same activities rather than different tasks will positively affect the job's outcome. Please put it in other words, the more similar tasks the workers accomplish, the more productive the tasks and the more lucrative the workers will be. In this line of thought, not only will the workers benefit from the similar tasks materialistically, but also the company they work for will become prosperous, As a result, since doing similar tasks shed lights on the talents and abilities of the worker, they will, in turn, obtain more remuneration and less amount of of time will be spent in order to do the job. As an illustration, my sister works as a translator in a company, and from the first day of her job, he assured the manager to be the Persian to English translator, not vice versa. Having focused on one task instead of engaging in two or three different ones related to translating, she has masted her translation ability. Therefore, she has been given more salary compared to other colleagues. However, her other co-workers who have been struggling and delving into various translation types can not be as productive as my sister is for the company; hence, they could not get salary as much as my sister. Therefore my sister purchased all of the life necessities quickly and even have traveled to different places where she had wished previously and highly fulfilled from her career consequences.
In conclusion, considering the aforementioned reasons and examples, it is a foregone conclusion that working at similar tasks during workdays is more beneficial and satisfactory. Not only will they become experts and gain enough experience in their responsibilities, but also they become proficient and productive for the company they work for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2737.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 553.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94936708861 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84335147438 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499095840868 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 864.0 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.210464902 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.052631579 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1052631579 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269149553734 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840523484768 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546051185346 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172824720572 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432671460213 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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