workers prefer to have different types of tasks
Managers are always concerned whether it is a wise idea to let their workers get involved in different types of tasks. Some managers do understand that workers prefer that, but they still focus on what benefit the company more. In this article i am going to discuss why is it important to let workers have different types of jobs.
First, having different types of tasks can make workdays less boring. Since doing different tasks means they will get to meet different people during the day instead of working all day long with the same team. Well, a good relationship between the different departments and sections would bring a great benefit to the companies. For example, in my uncle's company, workers are allowed to do three different jobs during the same workday. This has added a friendly atmosphere to the company so you would see the workers coming excited in the morning with a smile drawn on their faces. Moreover, doing different tasks will be good in the way that they get to move from one place to another in the companies they work for, which means they will change the atmosphere every now and then which can help their brains to stay focused and consequently they will do work more efficiently.
Second, doing different tasks at work gives the workers the oppurtenity to gain more experience. Everyone cares about how long their experience is in a certain field, but it is also important to have an experience in different fields and different tasks. For instance, I remember when i used to work for a coffeeshop, I used to work in the kitchen get some snakes and drinks ready for the customers. One day the accountant was so sick and couldn't come in. So the manager asked if anyone had an experience to substitute him, and lucky me I had some experience from my previous job so i got to work as an accountant that day and got extra money for it.
Third, when workers feel that they are treated nicely by their companies they will be more loyal. As workers benefit from the job is the salary they get every month regardless of how good the company is doing. But when workers feel the appreciation and that the companies try to make their job more fun, they will start focusing more on the company benefit as a pay back to the nice treatment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, third, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62282878412 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45518671413 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478908188586 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9073920758 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302690866246 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114693658366 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101858854435 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197846927584 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112487091309 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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