Young people enjoy life more than older people do
The most joyful time of peoples life is still a topic everyone argues about. Everyone would want to know which period will they enjoy the most so they make sure the don't miss out on something. In my view I agree that young people enjoy life more than older people for three reasons.
First, as we all know the older we get the weaker we will be. That's why young people are more capable of doing things that they enjoy. For instance, I remember my dad and I discussing how great it would be if we were able to join a boxing club. In fact I did join a boxing club at the end, but my dad wasn't able to, because he is old, and he could not do such intense effort that he otherwise would have enjoyed. Moreover, my dads' favorite hobby was fishing. He used to go fishing every weekend because he enjoyed it so much. However, now he can't do that anymore. That's how getting older may abandon you from doing what you enjoy.
Second, when we are young we have less responsibilities. Getting older will always add more responsibilities to our lives that may stop us from doing what we desire. Since we will need to prioritize our responsibilities on our desires. For example, I remember when my oldest sister gave birth to her first child. She no longer was able to join us in our most joyful week of the year when we travel to a new country and get to know new cultures. And that's all because she needed to look after her child. That's how getting older and having more responsibilities will force us to give up things that we enjoy.
Third, we always have more time when we are younger. Since everything counts here such as the time you need to walk to your job or the time you spend eating. If we compared how long it takes older people to do things we will notice that young people have more time in their day just because they do things faster, and that's how they always have more time to enjoy themselves.
Finally, personally I am looking forward to enjoying each year of my life no matter how old i will be. Because at the end of the day you know that you could have lived a nicer day if you made an effort to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, still, third, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, you know, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27791563275 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26899706701 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476426799007 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3094832805 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9565217391 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5217391304 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310953941234 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10111551137 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151986801462 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196307820752 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128156785434 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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