glass harmful for birds
The reading discusses how glass as a building material can be harmful to wild birds that can't distinguish between glass and open air. The article discusses three solutions. The professor however, mentions that none of the suggested solutions would effectively work. He provides an explanation of why does he refute each of the solutions .
First, the one-way glass won't make a difference. The outside of it would totally reflect the light. Meaning that birds would still not be able to distinguish whether it is an open space or reflected light. As the professor explains that birds can't understand mirroring.
Second, the colorful designs won't do a great job either. As the author states that people from inside the building will be able to see through the openings in the design, which bring us back to the same point that there are some spaces in the glass that will look like wholes to the birds and they would still try to fly through it and end up getting hurt. The professor add that the only way that this solution can be effective is if the unpainted spaces were really small but that way rooms will be so dark from inside.
Third, the professor doesn't agree with the magnetic fields either. He posits that its true that birds have a natural ability to sense Earth's magnetic field. However, he disputes the idea of using magnetic field to guid the birds away. As he explains that birds don't use this feature when they are travelling in short distances such as moving from one side from the city to another. But they use it when they travel and migrate for log distances for instance, traveling from cold areas to warmer areas in winter. The professor asserts that birds use their eyes and the brightness to lead their ways in short distance traveling and thats why using a magnetic field around the building wouldn't help saving the birds from getting hurt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...erial can be harmful to wild birds that cant distinguish between glass and open air....
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... The article discusses three solutions. The professor however, mentions that none o...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...why does he refute each of the solutions . First, the one-way glass wont make a...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it is an open space or reflected light. As the professor explains that birds cant ...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t. As the professor explains that birds cant understand mirroring. Second, the co...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'adds'.
Suggestion: adds
... and end up getting hurt. The professor add that the only way that this solution ca...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...rk from inside. Third, the professor doesnt agree with the magnetic fields either. ...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e birds away. As he explains that birds dont use this feature when they are travelli...
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Line 7, column 631, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ir ways in short distance traveling and thats why using a magnetic field around the b...
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Line 7, column 684, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ng a magnetic field around the building wouldnt help saving the birds from getting hurt...
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Line 7, column 697, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
... field around the building wouldnt help saving the birds from getting hurt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, third, as to, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74846625767 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30079598175 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7224795204 49.2860985944 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0588235294 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245713862389 0.272083759551 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671511229675 0.0996497079465 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777428529602 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135482224116 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461875084534 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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