altruism
The reading states that Altruism is a type of behavior in animals and humans in which they sacrifice their own interest for other members.The author provides two reasons of support.However the professor explains that in new studies it has been found that they aren't completely selfless deeds .She also refutes both of the author's reasons .
First, the article asserts that humans sharing food and donating organs to relatives or strangers is an example of altruism. On the other hand the professor opposes that .She mentions that the donors will receive some sort of appreciation from the society as well as they will feel some kind of self worth. That's how it's not unslefish behavior according to the professor .
Second, the author posits that Meerkats show some altruism behavior. The professor doesn't agree with that. She provides recent scientific findings about this .The studies showed that the sentinel eat before stand guarding which means that they already have a full stomach and they didn't sacrifice their food for the other members to eat and hunt whilst protected by the sentinels. Also, the members who are hunting are in greater danger than those who are stand guarding .
The professor adds another fact that disputes the author's opinion about the Meerkats. She states that being a standing guard give them a better chance to escape when they see an incoming predator .This clearly supports that being a standing guard isn't as selfless as the article shows .
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...new studies it has been found that they arent completely selfless deeds .She also ref...
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...hat they arent completely selfless deeds .She also refutes both of the authors rea...
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...y as well as they will feel some kind of self worth. Thats how its not unslefish ...
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...hey will feel some kind of self worth. Thats how its not unslefish behavior accordin...
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...eel some kind of self worth. Thats how its not unslefish behavior according to the...
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...w some altruism behavior. The professor doesnt agree with that. She provides recent sc...
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...es recent scientific findings about this .The studies showed that the sentinel eat...
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...ey already have a full stomach and they didnt sacrifice their food for the other memb...
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...unting are in greater danger than those who are stand guarding . The professor add...
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...scape when they see an incoming predator .This clearly supports that being a stand...
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...ape when they see an incoming predator .This clearly supports that being a standing ...
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...ly supports that being a standing guard isnt as selfless as the article shows .
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...rd isnt as selfless as the article shows .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, kind of, sort of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11934156379 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40837948842 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.5221667124 49.2860985944 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 4.19205298013 573% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114495566156 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056636643075 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932576893576 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727832798508 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429712396406 0.0443174109184 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.