Working with hands or working with head and minds
Working with hand or head is an important decision to make. We usually choose our favorite type at the end of high school. I prefer working with head and mind rather than hands because it has benefits like higher salary, less pressure and better environment.
Higher salary means that most of the jobs that require intellectual ability are well paid. For example, executive managers who need to use their minds to do the job will receive a higher salary than an industrial worker in a car Manufacturer Company who mainly needs to use his hands. Although the worker may have a more important role, he will be paid less.
Working with head instead of hand could be less stressful because employers do not push the person to finish a task within a very short period of time. This contrasts with the jobs that require hand or physical ability in which someone is forced to finish the task in a short time without pay attention to the pressure and stress it has on the person.
The place of work or the environment of working is also important and it is vulnerable to type of the job we select. Usually, the jobs require physical ability located in less attractive places such as old factories. These places lack most of the standard features to improve work condition. On the other hand, location for most of the jobs in which employees need to use their minds to do the job is friendlier. Information technology companies as the companies in which there are lots of employees with brilliant ideas enjoy a better working environment rather than simple construction workers.
In conclusion, I think working with minds and using intellectual abilities has benefits that every person enjoys them. Higher salary, less pressure and better environment are a few benefits to name. Most of the people try to achieve these by working with their minds rather than hands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82242990654 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54087994293 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501557632399 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6531336386 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412508230549 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155478474284 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15471830717 0.0737576698707 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264949089597 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147470955439 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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