The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University."Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offeredby nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omnishowed a significant

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The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University.
"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered
by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni
showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and
classroom space, most likely because online instruction takes place via the Internet.
In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to
grow and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased. Thus, to increase
enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at Humana University, we
should initiate and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni."

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of
the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions
and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove
unwarranted.

The president of Humana university believes that they should begin offering online classes with the aim of attracting more students and decreasing the maintenance costs of buildings. The Omni university, more successful rival academic institute in the area, has recently migrated from traditional model of education which usually involves a lot of physical space to a virtual form which transfers knowledge through the internet capabilities. Now the Humana university wants to gain the same success by doing the same as Omni university. However, the assumption stated in the memorandum does not seem plausible, because there are probably other factors behind the success of Omni university.
First, the president of Humana University attributes enrollment reduction to the lack of online degree programs and uses the evidence from rival university to buttress his argument. Unlike the president who thinks being online is the first priority, students consider many factors at the time of applying to universities which is a wide area from quality to quantity. For example, value of courses, expertise and popularity of faculty members, library, internet access, dormitory and other facilities are among the contributing factors to student’s final decisions. Thus, assigning the success of Omni university only to online degrees is not wise.
Second, As the president of Humana university mentions, the Omni pays less for dormitory and classroom after going online so it would be a profitable strategy for humana university to doing the same thing. In other words, the president ascertains that if they offer courses on the internet, they can decrease the costs for physical spaces, but this idea is not going accepted by most students who usually expect a moderate price for virtual education or online degrees. In fact, one of the major motivators for students to choose online programs is the affordability so possibly the Humana university has to ask for an extra budget from government or to offer fee-based extra services to compensate maintenance costs.
Finally, another fact which undermines Humana’s university plans to go online is instability of the internet infrastructure in different countries which lowers the value of it an educational platform. For instance, In case of natural or manmade disasters, the cables or satellites will defiantly be damaged and the connections will be lost. It means that, extremely investing in online education programs not only provides benefit for the university but may completely ruin the reputation of its brand. Therefore, the Humanas’ president has to investigate other potential areas to increase the rate of enrollment and make revenues to meet the ends.
All in all, The recommendation from the president of university of Humana which mainly put emphasis on the success of another rival university because of offering online degree programs seems illogical, for the president’s assumption lacks to consider other important factors for students to choose a degree program. In addition, his belief to earns lots of money from online education is unmatched among students so he should not invest all his eggs in the basket of the internet, because of possible treating disasters.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, of course, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2754.0 2260.96107784 122% => OK
No of words: 505.0 441.139720559 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45346534653 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9711576311 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 204.123752495 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49900990099 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 901.8 705.55239521 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7185533891 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 119.503703932 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7058823529 23.324526521 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.70786347227 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286167414675 0.218282227539 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108213917334 0.0743258471296 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599941772384 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179898157298 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362563845698 0.0628817314937 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.3799401198 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 48.3550499002 52% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.5979740519 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 98.500998004 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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