You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Use specific answers and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, it has been a trend of moving abroad either for study or for settle down. In the given scenario, it is said that if am thinking of it too then what might be the outcome of going out of country? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that I would love the experience and many more life lessons. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, being in a place which is totally different than your home country allows us to be independent. To be more precise, since we far away from our family there will be no one to assist us in any way be it emotionally or financially. This compel us to to do everything on our own. For instance, my sister when she was in Nepal, she never stayed out of home for a single day without her parents. However, now she has become so independent and mature adult that she is a successful enterpreneur now in London. Therefore, although we miss our family so bad but this teach us how to be emotionally and financially independent.
Next, we gain a lot of knowledge and experience. Indeed, the culture , tradition and situation there in foreign country will be very distinct from our native one. Similarly, once we land in foreign land, we learn the exotic experience such as culture, living style and so on. Drawing from my own experience, my sister when she was here in Nepal, she knows nothing about the outside world as she was only confined to home only. However, aa she is a business women now she get to meet the people from all around the world which allows her to gain more new information from them too. Needless to say, this has helped her a lot to flourish in her career and in personal level as well.
All things considered, it is very advantegeous to live somewhere other than our own country. This led people to grow financially self dependent, professionally and of course personally. Hence, eventhough it will be quiet hard to stay far from our dear ones, the experiences we gain there is worthwhile. So, living abraod is always welcoming for all the people all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, of course, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51851851852 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64754657331 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55291005291 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1412508923 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.071610879165 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252004275531 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223015384502 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503986818841 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268793008925 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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