You have a choice of movies to see. What influences you the most in choosing which movie to see ?
Nowadays, majorities of people consider, watching movies as one of their favorite hobbies. different people have different interests. some like to watch movies of their favorite actor or actress while some prefer to watch movie based upon critics' reviews. while for me, I prefer to watch movies based upon a particular genre. Mostly, I like to watch films created with suspense or thrill and try to avoid romantic movies because I found them boring. I feel this way because I have my opinion which I will elaborate in the following essay.
Firstly, I like to watch films based on an interest of mine. most of the movies I like to watch are full of suspense and thrill because they intrigue me. it makes me feel as though I am watching something that has content. Basically, movie should be directed in such a way that the audience should feel attracted to the story. The story should be filled with the climax at each step. it should compel viewers to guess "What will happen next". people should feel kind of driven to watch till the end, get astonished by the twist and turns of the movie. For instance, I would prefer to watch a sherlock holmes movie than to watch Romeo Juliet. sherlock holmes is described as a fictional character in the movie and he has super detective power to solve every criminal case with precision using his mind palace (isn't it sound interesting). it is always the case that this kind of movie concludes in a way that few have ever thought of.
Secondly, if I am paying money to watch a movie, then it should be worth it. Depending on the genre, I choose which movie to watch in the theater. romantic movies, for example, are a little boring to me. I always fall asleep whenever I watch such kind of film. They're full of emotion and drama, and I usually don't like watching them. Likewise, I avoid watching films with action, violence, or bloodshed scenes, even though these are just fiction, just acts, but these types of films give me goosebumps. Therefore, I generally don't like watching these kinds of action movies.
In conclusion, I would say that I will prefer to watch a movie of my favorite genre rather than to watch a movie of my favorite actor or movie which is liked by the most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63819095477 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40396463861 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489949748744 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0758563047 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159657956511 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543733709058 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602691235641 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126474604009 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540801543574 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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