Young people enjoy life more than the older people do.
Life is meant to be lived and enjoyed regardless of your age or any other disposition. In my opinon, young people tend to enjoy life more as compared to older people. I would like to further elaborate upon this school of thought in the following essay.
To begin with, I feel young people or the youth truly get the meaining of "living in the moment". They usually do not have any qualms or regrets about their past. Moreover, they try to be less affected by the future. This concept of cherishing the present without worrying about the past or the future is essential to enjoy life. On the other hand, old people seem to have forgotten the things that made them ebulient. My own personal experience is a good example of this. I have stories about how my grandmother was the life of the house and an extremely joyful person. However, I have yet to see this side of her personality. Since my early years, I have known her to be rather cold and taciturn. She rarely tries to initiate conversation with anyone and usually keeps to herself. I believe her age has everything to do with this change in her behavior and way of living life.
Furthermore, I think it is physically implausible for old people to undertake activities or projects that may bring happiness to them. Young people tend to participate in a number of eciting and enthralling actvities such as bungee jumping, river rafting, extensive travelling etcetra. However, it is ignorant to think that older people would be willing and or capable of these physically demanding endeavors. Young people also tend to have a myraid of friends with whom they can plan events and vacations. This is not the case with the older people who have over the years experienced heartbreaking losses of both friends and family. For instance, as I said above, my grandmother barely has any friends. Thus, a lack of friends or a suitable companion prevents older people to experience new things in life.
In conclusion, I would like to underscore the above mentioned points that enjoyment in life is not guaranteed. It can be achieved if you have the desire as well as companions that share your passion for life. With that being said, I believe that not only the youth but the older generation is inherently capable of being happy and content if they really want to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...n, young people tend to enjoy life more as compared to older people. I would like ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217777777778 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.173333333333 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755555555556 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0733333333333 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0351676179071 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6716505781 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466666666667 0.0309702414327 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0822222222222 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133333333333 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2316.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71851851852 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308641975309 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22962962963 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162962962963 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116049382716 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6716505781 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.8751378327 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.875 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6780849932 48.84282405 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.791666666667 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.837962963 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.22058823529 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281345627092 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0807638659669 0.103427244359 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0443140396064 0.0752933317313 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448479775203 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118032607993 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987701750652 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960573341601 0.0781384742642 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.394071508182 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0487420446149 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206479355708 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595752831223 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.