Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
this topic raises controversial issue of whether young people enjoy life more or older people do. I think it may vary from people to people according to their perceptive and both have its own advantages and disadvantages. but, according to me older people have can enjoy life more compared to young people. I generally disagree with the topic raises by author. following are my accordance for it.
First of all, it true that in modern world, life has its easy pace but it is folded to too many folds. being a young people or a teenager people, life will be more comfortable, more enjoyable and you will feel more energetically active to do any kind of work compared to old people. but, in this fast moving world young people or working people will hardly get any leisure time you have to continuously try to cope with this fast moving world .if you are able to cope up you can go through it otherwise you will be ignored due which results in hypertension that directly affect your health. if they, they will get caught in some other work. Anyone hardly enjoy their leisure time. For e.g., as I am a working women, I hardly get any time to spend with my family to go out and chill with my friends. I am continuously get stuck or caught in to different work and in different projects and at last i feel exhausted and so tired that I hardly enjoy my spare time.
Further, being an old person, it is true that you will be no more energetically active than you used to be. but, you will find lot of leisure time as there will be no work burden on you. you will be free to do things whatever makes you happy without any interference. you can go out and chill with your friends. you can spend enormous amount of time with your family and can spend more of your valuable time in enriching your passion and can try more adventurous things. you can have plenty amount of time to do something different and more interesting rather than going to the job and following same hectic long working schedule daily.
In conclusion, moreover it may vary from people to people according to their perceptive and both have its own advantages and disadvantages. but, according to me older people have can enjoy life more compared to young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., first, if, may, moreover, so, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58415841584 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47811714846 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433168316832 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6778270204 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352246970464 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133555069892 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174542488135 0.0737576698707 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290639911255 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162501565282 0.0645574589148 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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